“Wild animals have no place in the 21st century. Some people think that preventing wild animals from dying out is a waste of resources. Do you agree?”

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Wild animals are believed to have no place in today’s world, therefore, their protection is a waste of resources. I strongly disagree with this view as wild animals are part of our ecosystem and they have as much share as we have on this Earth.

Preserving biodiversity is worth spending resources as it is essential for a healthy ecosystem, which is a  delicate system. If a single species should become extinct, this inevitably leads to disastrous results. In this case, the whole food chain is disrupted, which can affect all species, including humans.

Since human activities are the main reasons animals’ existence is in danger, it is our obligation to protect them. Exploitation and overuse of natural resources has brought many wild animals to the brink of extinction. Had it not been for deforestation of rainforests, many species of these areas, such as golden lion tamarin, would not have become extinct.

In conclusion, I believe wild animals have a place on Earth and protection of biodiversity and a healthy ecosystem is a primary obligation of humankind.

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